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Post by Rabbit♥ on Wed Jul 29, 2009 6:10 am

My brother was clutching a tissue,my mother was too,while my father just looked away holding his tears in. I stared at monitor,I was dead. But why was I still alive? I knew the answer though,I was a ghost. I didn't want to be a ghost,I wanted to rest in peace. I slowing took a step out of my body,leaving my lifeless corspe behind. I moved to my brother,I want to hug mum. Suddenly my brothers body jerked towards mother,almost robotically.I didn't want to do that. Hug dad. He again went and hugged dad. Stop playing with my thoughts! Are you a ghost? Is that you...Kat? Get outta my body! Yeah,but one quetsion,do you feel me? I sorta feel werid yeah. As I drifted out of his body,I saw a weird light...

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Post by Cheezeh on Mon Sep 07, 2009 5:19 am

oh this ones great but who you talking to in the bold parts

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Post by Rabbit♥ on Fri Sep 11, 2009 3:51 pm

The bolded parts are her brother talking to her via his thoughts.
I've kinda abandoned this now. ^^
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